ASC Awards: Next Generation Authors: Next Generation Authors: Comments Given

It\'s a Long Way to Eden by Ventura33

The way you incorporated a near nekkid Picard is priceless, but I especially liked some of the section opening lines like \"Probability had been taking a beating lately.\" Nice one.
-- Seema, 00:16 02nd March

PrereQuisite and Presumption by Lori

I enjoyed looking at the P/T relationship from Yves\' POV and the different \'what if\' scenarios Q showed Yves were particularly well done; my favorite was the Riker/Troi one with its tense dialogue. Nice job.
-- Seema, 00:35 02nd March

Why don\'t we... 1 by AndreaT

I want to read more! Excellent.
-- trekchic, 07:33 02nd March

The Really Long Straw by Rob Morris

This was a cute story that made me chuckle. Rob has a way with humor that keeps me laughing and makes me want more.
-- Cait N., 08:27 02nd March

Race Against Time by Sisko2374

Cute story. Good use of that line, quite a pun. And very good use of technobabble!
-- Gabrielle Lawson, 15:39 02nd March

18 Sisko2374

I\'m not a big TNG story reader, but I saw Sisko\'s name and, remembering how much I loved Sisko\'s DS9 stories last year, gave it a try. Sisko has quite a talent. Subtle drama and quiry pun. And a talent for technobabble I\'m jealous of.
-- Gabrielle Lawson, 15:41 02nd March

Alone Inside by Heather Smyth

Dealing with Picard\'s Borg trama is a subject that a lot of authors would rather just skip. Dealing with that, Crusher\'s pregnancy, and a rather threatening injury, that\'s a serving on Picard\'s plate that few would attempt. Heather, however, does, and does it well. I look forward to more works by her, hopefully better formated.
-- Stephen Ratliff, 23:28 02nd March

But For Love by Patricia Ann LaFerrara

I think this was a wonderful story. I loved it. I can\'t get enough of it.
-- Kristy Wolfe, 09:55 02nd March

But For Love by Patricia Ann LaFerrara

I cannot get enough of this story. I think it is one of the best I have ever read.
-- Kristy Wolfe, 11:55 02nd March